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Lindsay
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2003-08-04 11:09 PM



Well I asked your for a second chance
The one I didn’t deserve
But I was to late in asking
You have found someone new

I guess I got what I deserved
I should have seen it coming
You deserve someone better than me
Someone who can give you what you need

So I hope the two of you are happy together
I wish you the best of luck
I hope you have a long relationship
And I hope she doesn’t break your heart

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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2003-08-05 03:51 AM


i searched for the first one and both are good. don't think of your self as not good enough maybe they weren’t and couldn't stand to be with someone grater then them. don't dwell on this to much depression sucks, good write and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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