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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I want to know how you are late at night.. I want to see you laugh so hard that you fall over. I want to see you sleep, hear you breathe. I want to be the steam from your shower, collecting along the mirror. So you see nothing but me. Feel nothing but me, so the cold and heat combine and its overwhelmingly relaxing. I want to be in the kitchen serving you breakfast. I want to hear you speak with food in your mouth when I ask you a question. I want to kiss you, long and hard. Bruise my lips I don't care... Just to have you there.. Would be everything. [This message has been edited by Lexy (08-04-2003 03:31 PM).] |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
I liked this one, its sweet. Its true to, to have that special someone counts out anything else, its just...everything you'd ever want, I yet have to find my someone. But he's hiding around a dark corner for everyone. so I guess its not all that bad. Keep up tha good work *smiles* * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Awww, this was so sweet! This poem just explained everything I want a relationship to be!  This was REALLY good! ~Jess  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
yeah, yay for you!this was so cute, and so real to my thoughts.! This Cool Night Air Is Curious... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i like the content of this piece it was cute. keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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