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Teen Poetry #6

what would frued say?

collarbone_girl
Junior Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 45
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-08-04 09:20 AM

Why
Out of all the people in your life
Must I be the one left holding you up?
The one left to
Clean up your used tissues
Your used hearts
Broken memories and
Freeze dried tears?

Do I always have to be the one
To dance across this
Broken glass alphabet
Of torn up poems and one, two, threes?

As I hold your hand and we pirouette
I think about our relationship
And how I love to hate you
And hate to love you
I want to tell you to leave me and get a life
But the truth is, I can’t live without you

And yeah, I smoke too much
Write too much, cry too much
Don’t go to church enough and don’t sing enough
But when I look in the mirror
I look like you
Far too much for my liking
I wish I had hair as long as my heart
And hips as small as my veins

So
Yeah
I always have to be the one to pick up thje pieces
That I leave behind
And the broken hearts I tread on every day

Because
You are me and I am you
And I hate to love me
And love to hate me
It makes us feel alive

(( what would Freud say?))

This Cool Night Air Is Curious...

[This message has been edited by collarbone_girl (08-04-2003 01:29 PM).]

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

1 posted 2003-08-04 11:56 AM

wow. i really liked this. it kept my interest all the way through, something not a lot of poetry can do. good job and keep writing.
excellent write. much love, akie.

I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-04 03:42 PM

The first stanza was amazing. I love your writing. You express yourself so well. Its amazing...
~Lex

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

3 posted 2003-08-05 02:07 AM

"I want to tell you to leave me and get a life
But the truth is, I can’t live without you"

Exactly.

jaime.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

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