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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2003-08-04 01:16 AM

Fancy parties,
glittering in gold.
A fairytale,
different than once told.

Underwater adventure,
an untold fable,
romance long ago,
A tale of life to come.

Each of these scenarios,
running through the mind
of Jane Doe,
sitting in her padded room,
as the walls close in.

Inside the mind of someone,
no one bothered to get to know . . .

© Copyright 2003 Jamie - All Rights Reserved

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-08-04 12:36 PM

wow...kinda sad and creepy all at once...great job!

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-08-04 01:22 PM

This was a really good poem. Thanks for the read.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

3 posted 2003-08-04 01:26 PM

It was really good, It made me read it twice.
Thank you for sharing.

* A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey *

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-04 04:24 PM

This was great. The end wasn't something I was expecting. The last two stanzas were quietly powerful. Nice job.
~Lex

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