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Teen Poetry #6

Rippled...

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2003-08-03 11:54 PM

Im inocent when they look in the mirror
Hidden by the shiny rippled glass,
From the heat wave last year.
Rippled like me
Rippled like chips
salted on one side
the one with tang.
Im innocent and with the chomp of chips,
The flakes that are left behind on your shirt,
those are me.
Small sweet sugary salty stinging rippled chips.
Violated
Innocents eaten by the mouth.
Yummm..

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

[This message has been edited by Match (08-04-2003 02:23 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-04 04:37 PM

no ones responded? weird..this almost made me laugh. Great anology. so true. The first line was really good. short but so meaning fully. Who would have though likening chips to innosence. Creative. Thats what poetrys all about.
~Lex

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

2 posted 2003-08-04 10:13 PM

This is intersting. I love how you compared innocence and chips, very original.

Great work,
Lex

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