Morning After - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #6

Morning After

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-08-03 04:43 PM

Laying in bed, for hours upon end,
Swimming in her own heartbreak,
Mascara lines running down her cheek,
Usually at this time hair would be washed,
The same hair he ran his gentle fingers through,
Gloss would be applied to the thick lips,
That once held his sweet, not so innocent kiss,
Tight Jeans would hug her waist tightly,
Like his strong arms used to embrace
Get up; it’s a brand new day,
Wipe the mascara off your face.

By: Janna Shaffer
Age: 15

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

1 posted 2003-08-03 07:09 PM

when i read the title, i was a lil wary, but u got me...nice read, n ive been there

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-08-03 09:23 PM

i think there is mascara that doesnt run isnt there?

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

3 posted 2003-08-03 11:41 PM

lol yeah there probably is, I should get some of that!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-08-04 04:34 PM

wow, the best I've read from you. I'm impressed. It was really good. I found myself loving all of it.
~Lex

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.