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Toasty
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

0 posted 2003-08-01 04:57 PM


hello again- I wrote this for anytone who's ever been stalked....

What is is about me
that you can't let go
when did I show I cared
why don't you know

that I never looked for love
when I looked into your face
I never dreamt at night
of living in your embrace

you don't even know me
and yet still you care
I can't get 5 minutes alone
you follow me everywhere

you ask what I love
so you can love it too
you've given me so much to hate
but I only pity you

you look at me and see
something that just isn't there
I don't even know you
and yet you say I care

you send me love poems
and write to me at night
you follow me in the day
don't I have a right

to say I need my space
to just be left alone
quit asking for my adress
quit calling my cell phone

you don't really know me
you don't really care
stop searching for something

that just isn't there.

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

© Copyright 2003 Patricia Clark - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-08-01 07:53 PM


scary. Maybe your not forceful enough. Good poem none the less.
~Lex

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-08-13 09:53 PM


I agree with lexy, but still i get the just of it.
thank-you

Tequilia

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