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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-01 01:24 PM



Darkness invades her privacy,
When she sits down to write.
The demons in the dark won’t let her be,
Never a happy moment, never any light.

All her wounds won’t seem to heal,
The pain is even in her bones.
She’s suffered so much, and it’s real,
But no one believes her, ‘cuz she’s alone.

An unexpected burst of treachery,
Led her to where she is now.
All she wants – is to be free –
Of the torment she faces, but how?

Clutching her notebook tight,
She wants to walk away.
Only she has nothing left to write,
And nothing left to say...

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Lexia
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since 2003-07-20
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Nowhere
1 posted 2003-08-01 02:18 PM


I can really identify with this poem. You really captured the feeling well.

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
2 posted 2003-08-03 09:55 AM


This was awesome, Staci! I especially liked the last two lines at the very end of the poem. Good job!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
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North of Hell
3 posted 2003-08-03 02:04 PM


Wow...
I too can relate all too well to this. I've actually tried to write on this subject before but it doesnt work out. You've done it so well and with such honest expression. This was wonderful. Going in my library.
Kay

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

dertah
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4 posted 2003-08-03 09:24 PM


good onnnneeeeeeee.
peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears
5 posted 2003-08-03 11:54 PM


This was awesome! Great work! ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Match
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6 posted 2003-08-03 11:59 PM


Nice, I liked it and aswell could relate to the feelings.

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair


Alnilam
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7 posted 2003-08-09 11:19 PM


great job. its nice to see you writting and posting again. glad your writer's block ended. great post.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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Lurking
8 posted 2003-08-10 10:38 AM


Nice work Spine Grinder, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing this with us

Andy

SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
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Lost and Broken
9 posted 2003-08-11 12:02 PM


"Only she has nothing left to write,
And nothing left to say..."

Stac! This one is great! I ESPECIALLY love those last 2 lines. Beautiful.

God...you have such a way with words...not to get all sentimental...but you can definitely reach people. LoL. Ok...enough of that. Ha. Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
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my own special world
10 posted 2003-08-11 10:09 AM


I also really liked the last two lines of this one, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

~*Tantalize*~
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since 2003-07-29
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11 posted 2003-08-11 08:20 PM


She wants to walk away.
Only she has nothing left to write,
And nothing left to say...


That was amazing, wonderful work. Thanks for sharing.
Jen

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
12 posted 2003-08-11 10:42 PM


Thanks everyone! I'm glad you all liked this.

"Is there anyone out there cause it's getting harder and harder to breathe"~Maroon 5~

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