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Teen Poetry #6

Ghost

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-08-01 01:20 PM

I sit back and wonder,
Wonder why I even tried.
Wonder why I lost,
Lost all those tears I cried.

I can still picture-
Every detail of your face.
And how I feel so haunted,
Locked up in this place.

So I sit back and wonder,
Wonder why I have to hide.
Hide from all the pain,
The pain you caused inside.

No matter what I try,
I still can’t forget you.
Because you still can’t see,
What you really put me through.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

1 posted 2003-08-01 02:20 PM

This is a really good poem too.

quote:
Because you still can’t see,
What you really put me through.

I especially liked these lines.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-01 03:22 PM

Maybe its better that he doesn't know what he put you through. Great piece. I've felt this many times.
~Lex

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