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Evie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 15

0 posted 2003-07-30 09:06 PM

Hurting inside,
This pain is hard to hide.
Desperate to find a way,
To let go of this pride.
No one in whom I can confide.
Don't wanna keep reliving these lies.
Things of the past,
Turned into ash,
That cannot be swept away,
I've got to pay.
No forgiveness for myself,
I won't listen to anyone else,
I know what I've done is not allright.
I'll continue to beat this heart till it has bled.
There's no way on earth I am going to confess.
Numerous holes don't make me "blessed."
If you even just take a look at my face,
You'd know my life is a mess.
No where to turn to,
Except here in this place of unforgetfullness.
No place of bliss,
That I'm able to kiss.
Hatefulness leaves me pissed.
Once again I become dismissed.
Happiness is what I wish.

Tiffany Evangeline

[This message has been edited by Evie (07-31-2003 12:59 PM).]

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

1 posted 2003-07-30 10:33 PM

this is amazing.....simply amazing. i loved the emotion in this, and it was just great.......thanks for the read...

riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

2 posted 2003-07-31 06:37 AM

wow this is awesome and powerful and just awesome!

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

3 posted 2003-07-31 09:47 AM

complete brilliance(dont think thats a word but shows how much i liked it!)
-Emma

Evie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 15

4 posted 2003-07-31 01:04 PM

Hey guys, wassup? Thanx 4 all your replies.....they're much appreciated....I have a question for anyone that can answer it.....lol.....what does "Junior" Member mean? I was just curious becuz when I posted a reply to someone's poem the other day it said that under my name in the left-hand corner.....anyone know? Thanx 4 ur time and opinion.....I'm lovin' it! Laterz!

Tiffany Evangeline

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-07-31 02:23 PM

happiness.....ahh yes, i remember now.....

makaveli....

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

6 posted 2003-08-01 08:38 PM

Hey Tiff...
You did a great job on this one. Very emotional. I think you could work with it a little. Add a bit of diversity. Make it not so general. I like the part about ashes..
I loved it though.
~Lex..

[This message has been edited by Lexy (08-01-2003 08:40 PM).]

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