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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-07-28 11:43 PM



Absense words and proper grammer
Dark sounds in prison slammer
Guilty thoughts we procreate
Set a blaze and decorate

Sharp response and trial charge
Withered man address the searge
Fun and games and limit set
No parole is what you get

Never had a wisdom tooth
And broke the lines of hidden truth
Set a victim on the flame
Let him roll and feel his shame

Lost within a power trip
Set apart the truth might slip
Electric shock inside the cage
Return the favor carnal rage

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill roar like hell

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-28 11:47 PM


Woah...never have I read a rhyming poem---THIS well plotted out. I liked it. The rhyming scheme wasn't the LEAST bit predictable. Kudos.

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kj
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2 posted 2003-07-29 04:05 AM


this is awesome absolutly awesome
green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2003-07-29 06:33 AM


Thanx.  It feels nice to have gotten this out
dertah
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4 posted 2003-07-29 12:45 PM


makaveli.....
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
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5 posted 2003-07-29 07:46 PM


Well, you surprise me every time I read your words..amazing stuff. I'm so jealous.
But also in awe..
great piece.
~Lex

Song_for_Serenity
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since 2003-05-28
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6 posted 2003-07-29 10:30 PM


This was great! I don't think I've read any of your poems before, but if this is an example of your regular work, I believe I'll become a devoted reader. Keep up the great work! Have a spiffy day!
Sealed with a

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 2003-07-30 01:47 AM


Thanx everybody.  Im glad you enjoy my poetry.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell

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