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Do you even care?
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Do you even care? |
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T-Bird Junior Member
since 2003-07-02
Posts 17Washington, United States |
Do You Even Care? Do you know how hard I work for your approval? But I never get it. I’m not exactly sure what’s wrong with me, You never wonder, your always too busy yelling at me. I try so hard, do u even see that? All I want is for you to like me, But you don’t, and I don’t know why. I’ve tried for so long… I QUIT! All you ever do is yell and get mad at me. Do you see what you have done to me? I’ve cut, burned, and everything else imaginable to myself. I’ve made a lot of promises not to hurt myself anymore, but I’m not sure it’s worth it. Do you see how depressed I am? I don’t wanna be here anymore… I can’t take it I’m going insane. All this anger, hatred, and depression I fell right now is all because of you, mom and dad. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Woah..yes. I can relate so much to this right now. Its like I don't want to blame them, most of the problem lies with me..but the oter 25% lies with them... great expression I can feel your anger. ~Lex...  |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wow, this was very powerful..... quote: think you missed a done in there, shoudn't it be and done everything else possibly? this was very emotional and well put on paper, ( or computer for that matter ).....the flow could be just a bit better, but other wise, great write... riley *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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Rise of Truth Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 59Beneath the Fury Sun |
Rude? Huh. Well, as far as advice i'll just say anger can learn to dance as well. Ever heard of a furious ballet of destruction? Well, anyway. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
makaveli...... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Alright, alright, this does feel really awful, and I'm sorry. As a survivor (how many r's are in that word is that spelled right?) Anyway, as a survivor of the teen angst years I must throw in my unsolicited advice. I've had friends with your EXACT problems with the physical harm, and you need to realize it's not the way to handle things and self-inflicting pain when the people around you are working so good at it all by themselves just lets them win. Don't let them win. My parents made me feel the same way sometimes- even after a really good report card they'd act like the one C in math was the end of the world and I didn't even try. It takes a while for parents and other people to get it, so try and be patient okay? I'm sorry for what you are going through. JC "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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