Hey sry I haven't written in a while, I'v had a lil mental block , but it's gone know lol. Tell me what ya think about this latest poem iight, Thanks ~Angel~
I love being with you, and the way you make me feel. A feeling like no other, has ever made me feel, but this feeling that I feel, I'm not quite sure is real. For I fear it's just made up, because it's what I want.
Reach for the stars and never give up in what you believe in!
[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (07-26-2003 06:30 PM).]
ha ha, already doubting yourself i see. hey, if you want it bad enough then all you have to do is hold on as tight as you can. clearity will come eventually and youll be happier. hatred speaks from experience, he was in your position once.
hmm...I like it. But its bland. Try using creative twists when you can. ummm..it was a little on the short side too. That can be good if you have substance. I think this could have stood to be longer. I liked the last two lines though. ~Lex..
Thats interesting that you still feel this way.... Well anyway...This was a decent poem overall. Lenght like was said could be a good thing if it's deep and meaningful. This was meaningful but not real deep. Keep writing dear!!!