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Teen Poetry #6
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Evie
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since 2003-07-20
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0 posted 2003-07-25 10:38 PM

Whisper softly in my ear,
The beautiful words that I long to hear.
Sing unto me a sweet melody,
That expresses your great love for me.
Hold me forever in your gentle embrace,
And never let the smile flee from your face.
Enchant me with your kiss,
And let us dance in this heavenly bliss.
Please come to me,
I will wait forever,
If you promise to me,
That it won't be never,
When you come to me,
My silent prince.

Tiffany Evangeline
© Copyright 2003 Tiffany Evangeline - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
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1 posted 2003-07-25 11:01 PM

Um...I love this one. I have felt the same way time and time again. and now the person I have feelings for..is never what I expected. Funny how things change.
This made me think, I liked it.
~Sexy Lexy
Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
2 posted 2003-07-25 11:51 PM

I liked this one, It makes me remember back when I felt that way.
-ash

I'm just kickin it up
dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584
3 posted 2003-07-26 05:41 AM

*hahahaha, hatred laughs like french man and remembers a time when he said the same thing.*  very nicely done.
WinterWren
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...Coming to
4 posted 2003-07-26 12:15 PM

I really really love this one!
Especially the last 5 lines.
Beautiful.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.
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in the pouring rain
5 posted 2003-07-26 01:20 PM

this was good, but the title threw the ending....overall good, but if it were me, i would rethink the title a bit!

ri

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*
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