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Teen Poetry #6

Just wrote this...

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-07-22 12:51 PM

I wrote this a few minutes ago and I haven't come up with a title yet. Tell me what ya think and give me a few suggestions for the title if at all possible! Thanks...!

My hearts sighs of desperation,
Only pleading for some sort of inspiration.

I look into the dark night,
Searching for a faded light.

Nothing is sought,
Why did I even give it a thought?

Unable to find what I'm looking for,
Endless tears, my eyes start to pour.

Believe, Tomorrow is a new day,
What will it pay?

More stinging pain,
Inner strength, I must gain.

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

1 posted 2003-07-22 01:24 AM

Since this is so forward and creative, it has beauty. Maybe "(The) Color(s) of Black and White."

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-07-22 11:57 AM

This was good. I liked it alot. Sorry, though...I can't think of a good title for this. LOL. I'm not much of a help.

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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