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Babysinravah
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0 posted 2003-07-21 09:29 PM



I'm going to tell you about somewhere special,
about a special little land ...
where all my dreams come true,
its a place i call p.l.u.r.s.t.a.n. ...
in this place wild mushrooms grow atleast 3 feet tall,
all the colors of the rainbow ...
their the most beautiful of all.
As you walk through the softest grass the fairies soar by,
their blue, yellow and green tracers light up the sky ...
theres a never ending happiness,
and love for everyone in sight ...
and instead of daytime,
there it's always night ...
P.l.u.r.s.t.a.n. is always open for all,
everybody ...
Peace, Love, Unity, Respectful, Sociecty, To, Any, Nobody.
It's a place you can visit anytime and sprawl out on any hill,
all you have to do to get there is take a little pill ...
Just take a little trip it just takes a little time,
it's such a beautiful place that anyone can call "mine"...



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1 posted 2003-07-21 09:33 PM


Sweet!! I am loving this piece!! The flow is a bit off in places but I'm getting a kick out of the meaning behind this poem! The imagery is lovely and it indead sounds like a beautiful place to be..I'll have to visit soon!! .:sidenote On the rainbow line I would put "are their most beautiful of all" seems to make it flow better but maybe that's just me!
~Live and Luagh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

Babysinravah
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since 2003-07-21
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2 posted 2003-07-21 09:37 PM


thanks,

But I question whether you really no the meaning behind it...But if u have an idea let me know?

Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22
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3 posted 2003-07-22 01:00 AM


Now, is this pill given to us by Morpheus because then I'm not so sure. Hey it does kinda tempt the mind... mmm colors.
EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02
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England, UK
4 posted 2003-07-22 07:16 PM


You know, I dreamt about something like this only the other night. I couldn't help but wonder if someone put something in my drink.
Anyhoo, very pretty. It's got some cute imagery in it.
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

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