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Teen Poetry #6

The Line

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-07-19 05:34 PM

My life lays on a thin line,
And everyday I'm three sheets to the wind.
Wobbling aimlessly, losing my balance,
Taking every chance I dare to
To just...fall of of that tiny red line.
Hopping and skipping,
Prancing and dancing,
I'm under the influence and
Carefree to the consequences that come.
My mind is all blurry
And it's getting harder to remember
How I got here in the first place;
But right here and right now
It doesn't really matter...
The line is narrow and
I'm about to fall off of it.*

( NOT finished! )

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-19 07:04 PM

hmmm...for some reason I liked that as an ending, but who knows. This was good..

~Lex

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