Not One Of My Best ( Take It As You Will )

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Teen Poetry #6

Not One Of My Best ( Take It As You Will )

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-07-19 05:28 PM

Inflicted wounds
Upon a fragile heart;
Internal wounds
That may never heal.

Self denial;
Wishing false things true.
Social outcast,
Less than average.

Mediocre being,
Nothing special to say the least.
Pride demolished...
Now a charity case.*

~I admit, it isn't that great...it's just what I had at the time...

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2003-07-19 05:33 PM

Hey J.Lynn

I thought the piece was great. I enjoyed reading it. I might think it'd been a bit better a wee bit longer, but, nevertheless, it seems similar to your other writings, and a good read. Looking forward to more, and hoping I'll catch you online sometime soon.

~Titus

The few. The proud. The Marines.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-07-19 06:58 PM

no! I loved this. especially the end. This was a great piece. Isn't it funny, the poem you dislike other people will love?
Keep it up!
~Lex..

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