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a girl overlooked (might be triggering)
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a girl overlooked (might be triggering) |
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@nÅngelÖf£ife New Member
since 2003-07-18
Posts 4pennsylvania |
A Girl Overlooked She sat in a corner, as everybody passed her by. Nobody cared what she was going through, and nobody knew why. Her tear stained face, was overlooked and tossed aside. Nobody saw her pain, nobody saw her cry. She was asked to a dance, about a month ago. She said yes, as she turned to go. She was ecstatic that somebody was interested in her. The night of the dance she was dressed up, and wrapped in fur. Nobody knew, not even her, what would happen that night. He picked her up, leaving her parents' fight. She was nicely dressed and ready for some fun They left the dance, but the night had just begun. He took her behind a run down old shack. Too caught up in the moment to turn back, She knew what was going to happen, She licked her lips, as they started to chappen. She didn't know how far it would go, They started to kiss, letting their feelings show. He unclipped her bra, and let it slide down. She stepped away, scared, and alone. She tried to run, tried to hide, Which way to go, she was to slow to decide. He chased after her, and pushed her to the floor, Wouldn't let her up, until he heard the words "MORE" But those words wouldn't come from her small, fragile lips, She was too frightened to move, screamed NO, but he had a hold of her hips. Her tear stained face, is ignored, and passed by, As if she was an annoying, buzzing fly. Nobody knows what is wrong, and nobody cares, Too busy to notice other peoples affairs To stuck up to help a fragile soul, to scared to be alone Showing emotions, they don't know show. hat girl you see on the street, what if she was you If you were her, what would you do? Would you keep it all in, and let yourself be ignored, Or would you make him get what he deserved? She is pregnant, at the age of fourteen, Mad at herself, for not being able to see. Is it too late to think about that? She's already showing, or is it just fat? hey don't care, so why should she go on with life? Why shouldn't she die? Get rid of her strife. Just another girl off the streets, another statistic, But she doesn't want them to win, it just isn't it! She gets up from where she was kneeling Walking around, watching other teenagers living life freely, Little kids, with their moms, and knowing, she wasn't alone In having a child, made her go back home. this is my 1st poem here tell me wut u think!!!!! thanks Kay |
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sitaisnumbauno New Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 7Texas, U.S.A |
that was a great poem. I have only one question....is that u? "If you love someone put their name in a circle not a heart, a heart can be broken but a circle goes on forever." |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
This is a very well written poem, Kay. It's admirable that you desire to write about important, relavant issues for today's teenagers. It's hard to take issues such as abuse, sex, and teen pregnancy, and write about them in a way that isn't glorification or naivete or a blase attitude, or a mix of the three. While at times a bit extreme in it's written violence, it is well written. Welcome to pip, Kay. ~Titus  The few. The proud. The Marines. |
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@nÅngelÖf£ife New Member
since 2003-07-18
Posts 4pennsylvania |
thank you for replying.... no..it didnt happen to me! and im glad it didnt! but i have been thinking about things like this!!!! im glad sum1 replied.! im sry i havent written back earlier i was at myh daddys house! thank u all for replying again!!!! and i agree that situations like rape and abuse is kinda hard to write w/o glorification!! but easy at the same time!!!! well.....kinda confusing...so ima go!!! luv ya! :B mwah..... Kay |
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