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Otaku
Junior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 39
Western Australia

0 posted 2003-07-18 03:37 PM

I don't know how I could have made myself
Any clearer..

But here's what I have to say:

You are an idiot.

She treats you like dirt,
She toys with your emotions..
She stabs your heart with her insane high heels...
You're better off swimming in shark-infested oceans..

She even bloody cheated on you,
Shattered your heart in so many ways..
And here you are sobbing your eyes out...
Wasting precious, valuable days..

Don't you remember Christmas?
How you took her to that dance?
She flirted with every guy there..
Including some fag named Lance..

I don't understand..
How you still want her back..
Slap yourself in the head,
And get back on track..

You could be living your life,
Instead of sitting there crying..
Would you want her to screw you up again..?
With her consistent, butt-faced lying?

Eh? What are you doing?!
Don't bother writing her a poem!!
Girls like her don't deserve such gifts..
Yeah....We'll show 'em..

Why cry for her..?
She deserves a knock in the head..
She had the balls to cheat on you..
Even with your best friend, Ted..

And for heaven's sake, stop being sad..
Stop with the act..
This will make you stronger.
And that's a fact.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-18 04:29 PM

lol...I know I shouldn't laugh but I found this down right ridiculous. It was great, in a stupid way.
~Lex

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 2003-07-18 10:37 PM

It was a good light relief...
Sometimes we forget Coloquial can work too...

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

fallen_star1715
Junior Member

since 2003-06-25

Posts 18

3 posted 2003-09-01 05:14 AM

HAHAHAHA This was a GREAT poem! Its all true and u made it funny as well! Your a great poem ill be loooking out for more of ur peoms! Keep writing!!!!!

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

4 posted 2003-09-01 11:46 AM

Hey i can agree with that. This is a great poem. But i think u should tell the guy also not just in the poem, or let him read the poem. Great Write. Keep up the good poems!!

!^*Manth88*^!

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