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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-07-17 01:14 AM


yesterday I rose from bed
with a notion in my head
saying that even when she's green
to treat her better than a queen
to do little stuff to make her smile
and make every moment worth her while
to bring her flowers, pretty and fresh
and help her clean up any mess
To be there for her, at any time
to comfort her and ease her mind
To let her know, that I care
and a girl like her is very rare

Yesterday, I rose from bed
with a notion in my head
that I'd have no one other
I cant explain how much I love her


  Yeah, I know this is cliche and all that, but....I just....put it on here anyway.

-Stinky Twinkie thinks Milk is devil juice-

© Copyright 2003 Stinky Twinkie - All Rights Reserved
dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-07-17 12:53 PM


nice write.  dont let her go.
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
2 posted 2003-07-17 02:40 PM


its cute. I loved it. Its nice to know people still care.
~Lex.

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