For those who deny their maker

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Teen Poetry #6

For those who deny their maker

Rise of Truth
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since 2003-07-12

Posts 59
Beneath the Fury Sun

0 posted 2003-07-16 03:22 PM

Venire Facias

Was that you?
Standing behind as I cut her down,
Oh surely your grace her life stolen?
A broken glass shard sawed
THE NOOSE I TAUGHT
Her how to make,
Taut it grasped her neck above
Silver chain tangling your Cross!
Oh life is going so well
I’ve only Jesus to thank,
Did you impart me strength?
When I saw the silhouette swaying
And found myself paralyzed by,
HER DEAD EYES
Did you let the rhetoric of why,
Consume my shattered mind
Have I found my Jesus Christ?
Someday I hope

He’ll answer for this “wisdom”.

I am the prophet
Harbinger of what you fear the most
Your enemy of belligerent honesty
Destroyer of your livelihood, built on falsehood

Magia_negra
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 77
CA, USA

1 posted 2003-07-17 08:36 PM

I could feel pain and rage as i was reading it. Although the poem was kind of confusing for me, i liked these strong emotions.

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
mi vida...

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