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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-07-14 04:18 PM


And I lay here with the covers over my head.
Swallow breathing to go right along with my shallow thinking.
I wish my mind would quit soon, so I could get some decent rest.
Dim light of the moon.
My stomach churns and I'm thinking of this bittersweet sensation.
And I stare out the window again,
at the street..
looking for something..
or the absence of.
Everything I've known is changing.
I'm sorry , please excuse me, I believe I have the right to my own feelings.
My head is pounding, I think too much.
I feel like crying because of the inability to act.
I stir my feelings as they burrow deeper.
Poison I continue to drink.
I love to drink..I can't live without.
Wishing slightly I'd never known.
Somethings burning at my eyes..
the acid of my supressed tears..
Telling me something I don't want to hear.


[This message has been edited by Lexy (07-14-2003 04:20 PM).]

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Rise of Truth
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since 2003-07-12
Posts 59
Beneath the Fury Sun
1 posted 2003-07-15 07:18 PM


Sleep doesn't always come easy to the wary mind, eh? Personally, i would never consider limiting my bountiful thoughtstream, for the only alternative is suffocating silence.

I am the prophet
Harbinger of what you fear the most
Your enemy of belligerent honesty
Destroyer of your livelihood, built on falsehood

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2003-07-16 03:35 PM


Very excellet poem!! I LOVE this one,
especially the last 3 lines. *sigh*
Once again, Well done.
Thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

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