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snoduck
Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99
Selah, WA

0 posted 2003-07-13 05:02 PM



It's your birthday
Yet another year gone by
So fast
It blurs like a sandstorm
Fading
In, and out
Like you
I hold something for you
So deep inside
You will never
Find a replacement
But that's what you want
So it's okay right?
I would never dream
Of letting you down
By your side
Forever I stand
Hopelessly devoted
Is that what they call it?
I've grasped my feelings
And held them tight
I'm too afraid
Of what you'd say
So I will stand alone.

© Copyright 2003 Erica Reeves - All Rights Reserved
CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
1 posted 2003-07-14 12:35 PM


You still amaze me with the things you write sometimes, Erica...  This was good, I liked it.  

By the way...  I haven't talked to you since school got out and I dunno how to reach u, but drop me an email sometime...  I'd like to catch up.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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