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Fire in your eyes

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Paragon
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since 02-16-2003
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0 posted 07-13-2003 07:31 AM       View Profile for Paragon   Email Paragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paragon


Wisps  of flame dance
across your eyes
as we lay tangled up
in each other's embrace

That self-same fire
in your eyes
rages within my chest
and grows with
each breath

Hands and eyes
roam freely without
restrictions
lips converge in
a shower of sparks
for now, we have
set aside our masks

Never have I felt
this way for another
yet there is sadness
within this joy
to know that, ours,
like all fires
will dim, fade, and die
but for now
I am content
here with you
© Copyright 2003 Paragon - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 06-08-2000
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S


1 posted 07-13-2003 08:53 AM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

a great poem my friend. i hope to see more from you real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Alnilam
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since 07-04-2003
Posts 75


2 posted 07-13-2003 11:57 AM       View Profile for Alnilam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alnilam

I think you did a really good job. I like the style you use. Ill look forward to more of your work.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

BrokenDreams
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since 02-09-2003
Posts 432
In The Clouds


3 posted 07-13-2003 03:00 PM       View Profile for BrokenDreams   Email BrokenDreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrokenDreams

This is how I feel right now. This poem really touched me. Good write, and thank you for the read. I'm putting it in my library, if you don't mind.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (07-13-2003 03:02 PM).]

silvrduck
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since 11-05-2000
Posts 153


4 posted 07-13-2003 07:26 PM       View Profile for silvrduck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for silvrduck

I really like this poem... I understand it completely
Great job, keep posting!

*the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made*
~jewel

lingering thoughts
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since 05-03-2003
Posts 70
Illinois, USA


5 posted 07-14-2003 12:44 AM       View Profile for lingering thoughts   Email lingering thoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lingering thoughts

i really like this one !!
its something most people can relate to
keep writing !
CaSSandra*
Deep_Inside
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since 02-14-2002
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding


6 posted 07-14-2003 01:43 AM       View Profile for Deep_Inside   Email Deep_Inside   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep_Inside

this is a grate poem i felt this way about many people and in the end it always seems to end up the same but anyway keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

dertah
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since 06-18-2003
Posts 584


7 posted 07-15-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for dertah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dertah

not every fire has to fade away. there is a way to rekindle the fire, you just have to look.
frolicking dolphin
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since 02-23-2003
Posts 276
my own special world


8 posted 07-16-2003 10:35 AM       View Profile for frolicking dolphin   Email frolicking dolphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frolicking dolphin

I really liked this poem, I liked most everyone else can also relate to it, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 07-16-2003
Posts 251


9 posted 07-16-2003 08:07 PM       View Profile for CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa   Email CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa

love it. great job, and hope that you'll keep writin
GothicCherry
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since 09-16-2008
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TN


10 posted 09-24-2008 02:55 PM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

NICE!!!!
 
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