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Fallen_Angel
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since 2003-07-01
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0 posted 2003-07-01 06:34 AM


I had an angel a true sight of heaven.
She turned my life around and i'll never forget her.
She was a flower a true sign of hope.
Everyday im away from her is like an enternity.
Only worse now im full of heartbreak and pain.
And I have nothing left to gain.
Everyday it drives me insane the first one i loved.
She played me like i was a game.
What more can i say pain is for me everyday.
The sky is now grey and my life is in dismay.
This is love so be careful when u play.
It's an early grave and you only get hurt.

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1 posted 2003-07-01 05:26 PM


Im sorry that you feel that if you love you will only hurt...have you ever heard the quote.."If there was more smiles then tears, it wasnt a waste of time"...well thats how it is with love. If you had more good times then bad, then it was all worth it because it shed light on new and exciting things and gave you new experiences. If you never suffered you would never appreciate anything good in your life...Unfortunately though, love is one of those things that helps you appreciate the good things in life because it can bring a lot of pain.

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

blueyedlioness
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2 posted 2003-07-01 07:15 PM


Hi... welcome to piptalk.

I fell in love once... he was more than I'd ever dreamed of or hoped for. But he didn't have the same feelings for me... and our relationship disappeared very quickly. I know how much it hurts... but before he left, he told me: "everything you thought was in your future is still there. Someday someone is going to come into your life and you're going to wonder why you would have settled for me."

I'm still not sure he was right... but I do know now that I can live without him. And you'll find that if someone can't give you back all the love you gave them... they're not worth it. No matter how badly your heart aches for them.

I wish you the best in finding all the love you're searching for.

-Lioness

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3 posted 2003-07-01 10:42 PM


You must risk it all, and sometimes get hurt in doing so.
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