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Teen Poetry #6
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0 posted 2003-06-30 01:31 PM



Touch it now
as it'll be the last time you can
This warmth on your face is gone
and tomorrow is here
What you can not have
hurts you the most
Pardon my grin
as it is no longer me getting hurt

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1 posted 2003-06-30 04:34 PM


Excellent! ahha karma....
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2 posted 2003-07-01 05:27 PM


Whoa...strong and amazing poem. Loved it!

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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3 posted 2003-07-02 08:53 PM


woah... I know this...

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

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