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Teen Poetry #6

Haven't posted here in a long time

ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

0 posted 2003-06-29 10:03 PM

Hey everyone, i haven't been able to write lately, just kinda waited for it to come back to me, and well today was the day i attempted writing for the first time in over a month and a bit. So please let me know what you all think of this, i should be around here a lot more now, looking forward to hearing your responses, and reading your work.

My worst enemy
For everything I am
You let me see
No escape from fate
Lost and filled with hate
Mad at the world, but why?
Looking at myself I cry
The pain felt by me
Is one you don't understand
Your blindly tryin to see
Gotta know this wasn't planned
Playing lifes little game
Losing, but who's to blame
At the end of the day it's the same
Left confused and alone
No love shown
To the World I'm unknown

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-06-30 10:47 PM

hey, I like this. I could relate to it a lot. Lately I've had a bit of writer's block myself, I just finally posted again the other day. Anyway, nice write, and thanks for the read.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-07-01 12:21 PM

This poem needs more comments!
Very good, I really love this one.
Especially the lines, "the pain felt by me, is one you don't understand." and "no love shown, to the world Im unknown." Wow.
Excellent excellent job. Perfect, and going in my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-07-01 01:08 AM

there was a time I felt like this, felt like everything I did was wrong, and misunderstood....it does change

great writing

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