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Obsolete
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0 posted 2003-06-29 10:48 AM



Consistency was never its strong point,
yet it was not in vain.

The packing of flesh as it becomes stronger,
and the man who feeds off of its growth.

What drives the bar up is a mixture,
a compound created from love and hate.

While it does drive me to pain,
I thank it for its escape.

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1 posted 2003-06-29 04:29 PM


I will be back

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

Lexy
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2 posted 2003-06-30 09:51 PM


hum..leaves much to think about, short yet very powerful. I have an interpretation which I'm sure is differnt from yours. What does this mean to you?
~lex

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3 posted 2003-06-30 09:53 PM


Great write
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