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Teen Poetry #6

I'd Wait a Lifetime

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

0 posted 2003-06-29 03:47 AM

Korny or not, I was confused. The guy this is about is my ex, he moved to tri-cities and I'll probably never see him again. I wanna know should I give it to him?
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I’d Wait a Lifetime

My life is empty
Without you around
Too much distance
That I hate
I can’t take it
Yet still I wait
Nothing can come between us
I will stand my ground
With or without you around
My love for you is pure
Something I want to stay
Forever
I’ve never touched your face
Nor held your hands
I’ve missed the experience
To look passionately in your eyes
But I love who you are
Who you thrive to be
Our love has lasted
Through good times
And few bad times
But hopefully
We can make it
Through life together
For you my love
I don’t care what the cost
To be your girl
I’d wait a lifetime.

Obsolete
Junior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

1 posted 2003-06-29 10:48 AM

Honest and passionate, I dig it.

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-06-29 11:52 AM

'Know how you feel.

Nice job, girl... and since I don't know the guy, I can't say whether or not to give it to him.

It just depends on if he's the type to read it and keep it and love you for it, or the type to scan it, and crumple it up, and forget about it.

Men are so insensitive.

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