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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-06-27 02:12 PM


*I think the title should be changed...but I thought this one would fit for now!*


So lost in the music,
I feel it moving,
Nodding just going with the beat,
The lyrics have my mind consumed,
The upbeat energy,
Just so powerful,
Does wonders for my soul,
The bass swifting up and down,
The waving piano sliding along,
Back and forth,
I feel every key press down,
Pounding uncontrollably,
Like my head,
It's silent...
So silent I hear it.

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

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SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-06-27 03:20 PM


Haha...I remember being at your house when you wrote this! Ah...good times. Anyway...I like this. You don't really write anything like this, and I think that's why it appeals to me. I'm a big fan of change when it comes to poetry. So nice job! Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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