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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-06-26 10:03 PM



dense inside
advantage point
force of breath
straight line
                   closure

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1 posted 2003-06-26 11:23 PM


well now, this makes me think of all kinds of things......I love it when a poem makes me think ( it doesn't happen often...lol me thinking that is)
BabieDoll
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2 posted 2003-06-27 11:11 AM


Short...but to the point...good job.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

BrokenDreams
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3 posted 2003-06-27 01:26 PM


Wow. A short poem that makes sense. I don't see that very often. Good job.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

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4 posted 2003-06-27 05:26 PM


I'd try to turn my thoughts over to something ready for shape, but I'm not melting into much.

Perhaps. Okay.

I just like how it feels.


the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

[This message has been edited by Jaime (06-27-2003 05:27 PM).]

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