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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

0 posted 2003-06-26 07:19 PM

Finally ripening with perfection?
But you're feeling these complications
Another hopeless situation
And the past can't be shaken
From your mind
But their mistaken
I see you awaking
And pulling pieces together
Shattered remnence of a
Crumbled dream
And a broken heart
It's coming together
These people are not the
Way you remembered them
Empty fascades filled with illusions
And they'll use you
They will abuse you
For what you are
But what will you do?

[This message has been edited by xEmperorEmber (06-27-2003 07:39 PM).]

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

1 posted 2003-06-26 07:21 PM

Dear Person in charge
My other poem, Removed? Relocated... or did it just fail to upload...

Paul

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-26 07:39 PM

Paul, I tried to email you, it bounced back to me....I pulled it, due to sexual content and the use of the word whore. It is under review, and when I have an answer for you, where shall I email it to? send it to my email if you'd like it kept private.

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

3 posted 2003-06-26 07:48 PM

Bobeatingsmurf@hotmail.com should work, if not you can ermmm eh i dont know.. just delete it and we'll never speak of it again

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-06-26 07:51 PM

sorry paully

maybe one day you'll manage to conform to standards. Im working on it.

this one is nice as well

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2003-06-26 08:38 PM

email sent, and this poem? Very cool

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

6 posted 2003-06-27 02:46 AM

The first line really sparked my interest on this one...Goob job. ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-06-27 10:46 AM

-Sighs- Love this

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

8 posted 2003-06-27 11:01 AM

Loved this...

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

9 posted 2003-06-27 01:35 PM

This was the first thing I've read of yours, and I have to say that I loved it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Also, interesting title selection. It's an eye-catcher.

-Jen

I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not. -Kurt Cobain

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

10 posted 2003-06-27 05:04 PM

Thank you, im glad you all enjoyed it... there are more if your interested... because i post different things on the website at different times... you understand.

paul

Jaime

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Member
Posts 250

11 posted 2003-06-27 05:23 PM

The big question.

It's not my favourite, but I like your message and the words in which you used to express it.

And I think that it's "ripening".

Love,

yours.

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

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