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Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

0 posted 2003-06-23 03:55 PM

Lately I have not had any way of getting everything that I'm feeling onto paper, so I've opted for posting some poems that I wrote earlier this year. I wrote this one a while ago when I thought that one of the best friendships that I had ever known was about to end.

Living wishful euphoria
And hopeless despair
Wandering aimlessly
Hoping that you’d be there
Restless leisure
No longer young
Joyful memories
No longer sung
So many chances
Left alone
So many conclusions
Never to be known
Too afraid to end this
But too proud to tell
That without you my life
Is a living hell
Please tell me what
I’m supposed to do
Because I really
Miss You

Hope you guys enjoyed. Have a spiffy day!
~Angela

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-06-23 07:28 PM

I did enjoy this one very much, I can relate to it, because I DID lose a very good friendship.
Im glad you managed to hold on to yours.
Thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-06-23 09:10 PM

Hey sweetie, If this is about a very enerjectic and sweet Asian woman then I'm sorry cause I watched you guys go through that but I'm glad that some of the important things were able to be saved. I liked the flow of this it is well done and your emotions are discribed clearly too!
~Live and Laugh~

Don't look to me for perfection, for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-06-23 10:54 PM

This is a very beautiful poem...but very sad. I can relate at this time in my life...it really hit home. Nice job expressing your feelings...I felt it the whole way through.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

4 posted 2003-06-24 03:05 PM

Hididdley ho neighborino! Thank ya much for the replies. It's great that you enjoyed the poem. I hope everyone has a spiffy day!
~Angela

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