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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-06-22 04:54 PM


Vicious tides wash upon my shore.
I'm a wild flower, searching for shelter.
But the wind is bitter, and the water is cold.
Roughly tearing at my petals.
I'm stripped naked, by this harsh weather.
The clouds stare down on me
with grey and angery eyes.
The rain drops giggle as they watch me struggle to stay alive.
They drown me slowly, and as I cry I hear the thunder mimick my pain.
They all watch as I fall slowly by their deadly rain(reign).

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rapturedmist
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 30
USA
1 posted 2003-06-23 02:32 AM


"They all watch as I fall slowly by their deadly rain(reign)." -->This is my favorite line. I don't know why, I guess it just reminds me of something.
-RM

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