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Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2003-06-22 03:43 PM



Push up bras
Mini skirts
Traveled halls
Were shadows lurk.
Clunky shoes
Sexy hair-dos.
Hidden masks
Painted faces.
Shadows in friendly places
Quivering lips
Candy ciggarettes
I left it all behind.

I'm just kickin it up

© Copyright 2003 Ashley Schell - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-06-24 12:51 PM


Very cool. I liked this a lot, and its so true, none of that makes any differance. I praise you that you have seen pst it all.
Short yet effective. Keep writin'
~Lexy

AlostHeart
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since 2003-05-01
Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.
2 posted 2003-06-24 04:24 PM


i like this short and simple a good way for some to write.


         ~Tori Louise~

Be happy, and respectful, dont forget about those ones that will always love you no matter how much you screw up!

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