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chasing rain
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0 posted 2003-06-21 12:07 PM


VI.

Charlie thought
Before he bought
An ice cream cone for me.

"Ouch!" He grinned
As I pinched him
To hand me all his money.

"No." He puffed
And in a huff
I left him standing 'lone.

"Wait!" He cried
And kissed my pride
While handing me my cone.

* * * * *
Lil kids are so cute.  

-Leah

[This message has been edited by chasing rain (06-21-2003 12:11 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-21 03:38 AM


Leah, I wish I could write like you. Seriously, I do wish that. And yes, little kids are cute

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blueyedlioness
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2 posted 2003-06-21 12:58 PM


Me, too.

Loved it, girl. It's so cool how comfortable you make your poetry.

And little kids ARE adorable.

-Laura

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3 posted 2003-06-25 04:59 PM


Wonderful writing Leah
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