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gorJess
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since 2003-03-24
Posts 15
new zealand

0 posted 2003-06-19 05:47 AM


cover me in kisses in the soothing summers rain
hold me in the moonlight until the dawn comes again
touch me with the sweetness of the early morning dew
surrender to the power of the love that i have for you
whisper words of passion as you gently hold me tight
tell me all your fantasies hours into the night
place your arms around me as we gaze into the skies
allow me now to live this dream without closing my eyes
tell me that you love me as i drift off to sleep
i will say i love you too, that promise i will keep
let darkness surround us as we fade into the night
awake me with a gentle kiss in the early morning light

Daddys little girl, but not the girl that daddy knew, daddy never had a clue

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1 posted 2003-06-19 07:50 AM


....mmmmm....what a gorJess poem....especially since I'm reading it in the middle of the night, here...perfect time for it, eh?

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blueyedlioness
Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
2 posted 2003-06-21 01:04 PM


THERE we go!

Almost seems like you have two personalities, girl. You write a couple of very different styles of poetry.

This is awesome. Nice, nice, nice job.

-Lioness

sitaisnumbauno
New Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 7
Texas, U.S.A
3 posted 2003-06-21 05:45 PM


you write some great poetry, i'm a big fan of yours, you always seem to amaze me. all your poems are great, keep writing!


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