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when i see you
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when i see you |
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gorJess Junior Member
since 2003-03-24
Posts 15new zealand |
no matter how hard you try to get over someone you will still have some sort of feelings for them, remembering the way things used to be and how they are now, and you sometimes hope that the new person in their life was still you, and that everything was how it used to be, erasing all the bad things that happened. Time is supposed to make things better, but in love it doesnt. Although we have been apart for a while, i still cant help wondering how your life is and when i catch you glancing at me, i cant help but wonder if your heart beats a little faster, as mine does when i see you |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
hmmm...just a little suggestion. i think you should write a little differently. i really don't like how u write it in paragraph form. it kind of loses my interest in the that writing style. much love, akie. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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