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kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
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California, United States

0 posted 2003-06-17 06:35 PM


Why I Hated and Loved High School

I had many joys and many sorrows.
For I was stupider than the one who borrows.
For the first time I felt loved.
But then felt crushed when I was dumped.
I quickly forgot it.
I readily continued to get hit.
Get hit with what? You may ask.
I mean get hit with everything, even with a discarded mask.
At times I felt like it was over.
I felt like an unsuspecting kitten, that was newly runover.
But like a phoenix, still I rise.
I graduated from High School, avoided my demise.
And now, I say, good bye.
To those in High School who wanted me to die.

© Copyright 2003 Jorge Vega - All Rights Reserved
Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-06-17 10:04 PM


Good write!! I hated highschool because it was boring and hard, the only part I liked was meeting my Amazing friends there!! I feel your pain, but it's over now, and I'm free. Good poem, good exression and feeling!! Keep up the good work!!
Jenn

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

[This message has been edited by Albino_Jenn (06-17-2003 10:05 PM).]

kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
2 posted 2003-06-17 10:16 PM


thankyou for your response, i too am free from the prison that we call highschool, now on to worser or better endeavors in college.
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