Teen Poetry #6 |
Too Greedy |
LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
I just want someone To love me To tell me they care Someone to hug me I just want someone To talk to A shoulder to cry on Someone to help me through I just want some To be there for me That i can trust in Someone to care about me I just need someone To be my friend To help me through this Til the very end |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
beautiful poem i truly feel your cries for a friend you beautifully conveyed your emotion with your words great job |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
WOW...A great poem . U really expressed it well. I know how u feel sometimes. But remember someone somewhere is always thinking of u. Can't wait to read more of ur poems. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
thanx a lot for all your replies |
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