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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
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0 posted 2003-06-17 01:30 PM


Sitting on the porch swing
I gaze into the sunset.
The breeze gently blows through my hair,
Giving me goose bumps.

The swing gently rocks me
As the wind sings a lullaby.
It sooths me, calming my soul,
Leaving me tranquil and free.

The concrete is cold underneath my feet
Making my body slightly shiver.
I close my eyes and take it all in
Putting everything from my past behind me.

Time goes on by
And the sun finally sets;
I sit with the dark sky above me.
The stars shine down,
Like a thousand tiny diamonds,
As I let the memory of you fade.

Sitting on this porch swing
I gaze into the darkness.
The breeze is now but a ghost.
What we once were
And what we have become
Are now left to the secrets of the night.*

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-06-17 02:22 PM


Wow Jenn...I really like this one. I think this may be one of your best. You did a beautiful job with this...everything flowed so perfectly. Absolutely beautiful. Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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