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Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-06-15 02:17 PM


My future’s so
Dark
Want to make my
Mark
On this
Cold world
But I feel like
I was hurled
Somewhere I
Don’t belong
But I must
Be strong
And hold my head
Up high
My destiny
I will defy
And make it
My own way
Live it
Day by day
You were just
Too blind to see
What I
Could really be
But I got to watch
My back
And keep myself
On track
People today are hard
To trust
Hard to tell love
From lust
But I’ll tell you
One thing
I hope you feel
The sting
That’s held in my
Words
I’ll let myself
Be Heard.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-06-15 04:35 PM


Good work! *Jumps up and down like an idiot* This was really good, seriously. Yep, I'm printing this one out! Hehehe ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

NickTofteland
Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74
MN, USA
2 posted 2003-06-15 10:19 PM


Very uniquely written... I like that in a poet. Good write.

Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God."

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2003-06-16 02:02 PM


Thanks you two. I'm glad you liked this.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

*Dark Princess*
Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 22
lost in the shadows
4 posted 2003-06-16 07:20 PM


Very nice...Youve been hurt but your letting it be known that nothing will keep you down...I like...Princess
SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
5 posted 2003-06-17 02:39 AM


Wow Stac...I definitely like this. I can see your writing slowly change...and I like it. Don't get me wrong, I love your old stuff...but your new stuff is really great, too. Awesome. Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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