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nomadd
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0 posted 2003-06-15 02:36 AM



her hair, so soft, so smooth
oh how i wish i could drown within its strands
to have it overflowing over me like grains of sand

her mouth, so soft, so perfect
it's contours so beautiful, so well drawn
as pretty as a springs dawn
following a blizzards snow
oh how i wish they were  over me
but i can only see

your smile, which breaks down even the coldest of men
light radiating from it, it is my religion, my zen

i realize i am but a visitor
i bask in her beauty but still
i can feel the meter
running out on our time
i do not care, she will always be in front of my line
but for now i'll just get to the back of hers

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1 posted 2003-06-15 08:37 AM


Welcome to Passions I think this is an excellent piece to enter with, very sensuous and silky. Thanks for sharing and I hope you will continue to do so
Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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2 posted 2003-06-15 10:29 AM


Welcome aboard, new kid....It's like that sometimes, isn't it, you're just willing to stand in any line, and do it no matter who cuts in front of you....but then, sometimes she'll take a stroll down the line and pull you out of it -- I found my perfect mate in exactly that way: she chose me, of all people....

A nice first post, this....oh, and check your E-mail...

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