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sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
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Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-06-13 01:03 PM


At the Gate

There's a place
where angles fly.
A place where children
no longer cry.

A place of love
and of hope.
A place unlike
I've ever known.

There's a place
above the clouds.
The place I know
your spirits found.

A place where you
know no harm
and are safe inside
Gods loving arms.

This is the place
where I long to be.
At heavens gate
that's where you'll
meet me.

M.P.D

Be yourself.  Say what you feel.  Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

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Toasty
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin
1 posted 2003-06-13 04:32 PM


wow... to put it simply, this is beautiful. Good job!Please continue writing, you have a knack for it. Keep up the good work!

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength."  -Francis de Sales.

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2 posted 2003-06-15 01:54 AM


This is a very beautiful poem, and I enjoyed reading it. I especially liked this ending.......

A place where you
know no harm
and are safe inside
Gods loving arms.

This is the place
where I long to be.
At heavens gate
that's where you'll
meet me.



Thanks for sharing it with us.

Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-06-15 02:16 AM


I have a feeling that for you the elevator will definitely be going up....

Good work here, well constructed and well written too.

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2003-06-15 09:01 AM


Very beautiful thoughts expressed very effectively
Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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