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JenniX Junior Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 29 |
You don't love me, for you never have. I hate you dear father, you only want what is good for you, what saves you money. I need a father, but feel you are lost, my soul has died, my love is no longer, You have denied me, I feel betrayed. I must rely on my fallen family, there is nobody to trust, you are not trustworthy, you hint, ask questions, to prove your guilt. You are different to me, it is my turn to deny you, for I must, or you will destroy me. |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
Wow! A lot of anger twards dad. A good write though. You didn't hold anything back that's for sure. I hope that things will work out in the end, but it doesn't seem like that will happen. Good luck, and good write. Sing'n Fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Just thought i'd send you this..alot of people here understand for different reasons /pip/Forum79/HTML/001004.html |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
wow. that was a good poem. i feel the same exact way, except father should be changed into mother for me. i hope things get better for you! again, that was a good write. much love, akie. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hard to say, so hard to say....but said so well here. The message is so strong and moving it's difficult to respond to the poem that carries it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JenniX Junior Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 29 |
I hope it gets better for all of you with parental troubles as well. Best of luck JenniX |
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