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sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-06-12 10:02 PM

Destination

Destination unknown
down this lonely road
through the twist
and turns of life.

For every curve thrown
we try to steer clear
of the danger
and keep our path
a straight one.

We know not what lies ahead
only what we've left behind.
This road must lead to somewhere
but our destination is unknown.

M.P.D

Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

1 posted 2003-06-12 10:44 PM

hey glad u posted another poem .. i like yours because they are short and to the point seems like i drag mine out LOL
but good job ill be looking for more!

*Cassandra

tonia
Junior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 41
taiwan

2 posted 2003-06-13 09:44 AM

good one...very nice! straight forward and free style...and easy to understand...you might want to write some more similar ones...to inspire ppl.
tonia =)

JenniX
Junior Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 29

3 posted 2003-06-13 12:20 PM

Great poem very inspiring. Continue writing ill be looking for more
JenniX

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

4 posted 2003-06-13 02:06 PM

wow- I like your style. It's quiet, yet powerful. Keep up the good work!

~ toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-06-13 09:21 PM

Very beautiful poem! I really love this one.
Especially the lines, "We know not what lies ahead only what we've left behind."
Exellent job, thanks for sharing.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

6 posted 2003-06-15 02:44 AM

Hey, I really liked your poem, hey I can really relate to your poem.

!^*Manth88*^!

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

7 posted 2003-06-15 08:32 AM

"The destination is unknown"...indeed it is. We don't even know that it exists. All we have is the journey between here and there, and that is what's important. Thanks for sharing this write

Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-06-15 04:35 PM

Right you are....and rightly spoken here.

Life does indeed throw us curves, and the best looking ones can be the hardest to negotiate......

Lordy, puns are fun....I'd forgotten how much...

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