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Song_for_Serenity
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since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

0 posted 2003-06-12 07:42 PM

I wrote this poem a lil’ over a month back. I once heard or read something somewhere explaining how when you love someone, after a while you start “learning them” – starting to know everything about them… some to the point that when you close your eyes and visualize them, you can recall exactly how they look, what they sound like, and even their mannerisms. I don’t know how well I’ve explained this thus far, but my whole point was going to boil down to the fact that this poem is about “learning” someone, and I tried to include all five senses in it. This is my first poem posted on this site and I hope that you people enjoy it. Have a spiffy day!

The lullaby in your voice
Beautifully deep
Softly whispering
To put me to sleep
The magic in your eyes
So unique in hue
Add to the reasons
Why I love you

Your sense of humor
Always making me laugh
Making me realize
You’re what I have to have
Your reassuring touch
Create feelings anew
And add to the reasons
Why I love you

I want to know
The taste of your kiss
The stars above
Upon I wish
Your sweet scent
Contributes too
They all add to the reasons

Why I Love You

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-12 07:56 PM

"The magic in your eyes
So unique in hue
Add to the reasons
Why I love you"

Welcome

I really like this, the flow is great! PS...check your email for a special greeting!

[This message has been edited by SEA (06-12-2003 07:59 PM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-06-14 09:22 PM

Awww..this was so sweet! I loved it, great work! ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-06-15 01:51 AM

This is a really pretty poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I hope to read more of your work. And, I would like to extend a welcome to you.......

Hugs

Ethel.....garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-15-2003 01:52 AM).]

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2003-06-15 02:32 AM

So there is a poet hidden inside there!! I thought you said you would never let people read your work? Heh..Well I'm glad you did this was very beautiful, if you haven't given this to him yet I would because your love for him shines through the whole poem...I wish you the best in all that you two have and continue to write, it's stunning
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2003-06-15 08:46 AM

"Why I love you"... *smile*, yes this is a nice way to think in terms of...all the things that evoke these feelings...you touch upon it beautifully in this poem. I say touch upon, because it seems to me that even if you wrote an epic, it couldnt contain even nearly all the reasons why you love someone. This is a lovely poem, thanks for sharing

Luv,Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

6 posted 2003-06-16 03:21 PM

This is beautiful, I am so putting it in my library.

oh yeah this was an excellent first post. I hope to see more from you.
luv, Jenni

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (06-16-2003 03:23 PM).]

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

7 posted 2003-06-17 06:40 PM

Hey everyone! Thanks for the welcomes and the replies. 'Tis true that I said I would never share my poetry, and I was apprehensive of actually posting one of my poems, but you guys have taken all of the worries away with your kind words. Again, thank you very much!
~Angela

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

8 posted 2003-06-21 06:08 PM

Awwwwww...

You have to show that to whoever you wrote it for... it's sooo sweeet... *smile*

Makes me almost wish to be in love again.

-Lioness

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