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morgansmiles
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since 2003-06-11
Posts 25
hicksville

0 posted 2003-06-12 05:34 PM


I dont feel like this all of the time...but i kinda do right now soooo...here are my curent feelings.

Jealousy hits me
Like the wind switching tide
Like the rain to the ground
And all control is lost
Only strength can endure it

The ache in my head
It makes me scream
I want to make them feel my pain
To hear my cries
And take all of my pressure
On to their own lives

If only I could show them
The way I am going to die
If I could take the torturous and constant heartache
That fills my own soul
And pour it out into them
Then when the wind blew
I wouldn’t be the only one who felt it

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LegalSecret69
Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69
Virginia
1 posted 2003-06-12 06:12 PM


aaww...this is really sad ...but it was a good write. -Jess
PrincessNets
Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA
2 posted 2003-06-12 09:02 PM


Morgan,
    My goodness... I'm sorry.  That is so sad.  :tear:  well, you know I am here if you ever need to talk and did I mention that that was a great poem despite being sad?? well it is!!! Love ya....
   _Nets_

I am a hopeless romantic not because I am hopelessly in love and not because love is hopeless.  I am a hopeless romantic because I do not see the hop

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