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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-06-07 11:07 PM


Your alone somewhere tucked back inside
The pain just wont subside
People know you as you are
On the outside
They don’t know your inside
Not every single feeling
Although they think they do
There wrong
Because no one knows you
Not the closest people
Not your closest friends
Not someone who examines your every single move
Cause there’s always that little spot inside you
That is hidden from the world


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laurie
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
1 posted 2003-06-07 11:11 PM


l like, but... you use the word, or the ending, 'side' a lot.
lol
laurie.

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